Question

临近毕业，我相信你一定有不再穿的衣服，看过的旧书，用过的书包，留着占地方，扔了又可惜。你是否想过把这些东西捐赠出来，让需要的人带回家，既能传递幸福，也能收获一份惊喜。近日，某英文网站提出“爱心助学”的倡议，请你就 “Give Away Something, Pass on Happiness”为话题，就此向全校学生发出倡议。

要点提示：

临近毕业，会有很多闲置物品，留着占地方，扔了又可惜；

不要扔掉，收拾好，捐给需要的人；

让需要的人带回家，传递幸福的同时，也能收获一份惊喜。

要求：

用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范；

可适当发挥，词数：80词左右。

不得出现自己真实姓名和学校等相关信息。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Give Away Something, Pass on Happiness

Now, we’ll graduate from school. Everyone must have a lot of things we don’t use in future. If we throw them, we will feel a little cad. But if we keep them, they will take up a lot of space. How to deal with them is a problem.

There is a good way to deal with the problem. Give those to somebody who needs them. If not only helps yourself but also helps others. When people use these things, they might feel happy. And I think you will feel happy, too.

Give away something, pass on happiness .We can do a lot of others. In this way, we can make a difference. Do you like my idea? Why not have a try?

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。