题目内容

创新写作:根据下面的提示内容写一篇短文。

要求:1、必须使用所有提示内容,可以适当补充相关情节。

2、语言流畅,合乎情理,不得使用真实姓名、校名等。

3、字数60-80。

Last Sunday, I went to…

I met…

I said goodbye to…

I was excited…

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答案:
解析:

  答案:One possible version:

  Last Sunday I went to Xinhua Bookshop to buy some books.On the way to the shop, I met a foreigner who looked worried.I went up to him and asked what was the matter with him.He said he wanted to visit the Three Gorges Dam but lost his way.I told him a No.3 bus could take him there.He thanked me and I said goodbye to him.I was excited that I helped others.

  评分细则:1.本大题共15分,内容和语言占14分,词数1分。按4个档次给分。评分时先根据短文内容和语言表达的准确程度进档, 然后根据细节确定分数。

  2.提示词语漏掉一处扣2.5分。

  3.情节构思不合情理扣1-4分。

  评分档次:

  第一档:(12-15分)能涵盖所有要点,行文连贯,语言流畅,基本无语法和习惯用法错误。

  第二档:(9-11分)能涵盖所有要点,行文基本连贯,语言比较流畅,但有少量语法和习惯用法错误。

  第三档:(5-8分)能涵盖大部分要点,但行文不够连贯,并有少量语法和习惯表达错误。

  第四档:(0-4分)只表达了一、两个要点,语言错误比较多,但有个别句子可读。


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