Question

书面表达 (满分10分)

假设你叫李俊，你的美国朋友David想要在中国结交更多的朋友。你通过电子邮件，把你的同学王明介绍给他。王明情况见下表：

性别	男
年龄	14
外貌	方脸，大眼睛，短发，高个子；
个性	很有幽默感，替朋友保守秘密，从不说他人坏话；
爱好	喜欢动物，在家养了一些宠物；
理想	当一名校长 (headmaster)，让学生有更多的时间娱乐；
春节计划	到美国旅游，参观美国白宫。

 要求：1. 注意文章条理，语句通顺；2. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不

计入总词数。

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.

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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Maybe you can show him around your country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Jun

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.

He is a 14-year-old boy. He has a square face, big eyes and short hair. He is tall. He has a good sense of humour. He keeps secrets for his friends and never says bad words about others.

He loves animals. He keeps some pets at home.

He wants to be a headmaster when he grows up. He hopes to make his students have more time for fun.

He is planning to have a trip to America and visit the White House at the Spring Festival.

I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Maybe you can show him around your country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Jun

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，首先，要注意格式，要有标题、落款，根据题目要求用准确的词表达出来，特别注意对不会的表达进行替换，展开来说，同时将文章写成经典的“三段式”文章，使用自己积累的高级词汇，作文模板，起承转合的词，将文章写出水平。

考点：有关应用文的写作

点评：对于应用文写作要简洁明了，直入主题，平时学习时多进行作文模板的记忆，万能句型的积累，在写作之前，首先对题目进行认真的审清，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的。英语文字不宜写的太小，所有字母都顶横线写好，看起来卷面整洁，写错的地方只需轻轻划一笔就行，切不可反复涂黑。