题目内容

书面表达(15分)

假设你是Tony根据提示语写一篇自我介绍,包括姓名、年龄、班级、国籍、家庭成员及职业和喜欢的颜色和食物,词数80词左右。(要求用上所有提示语)

提示语:Tony,  13 years old,  Class 4,  Grade 1,  England,  father, teacher,  school,  mother,

doctor,  brother,  driver,  favorite,  blue,  vegetable

                               

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

 

【答案】

I’m Tony     

My name is Tony. I’m 13 years old. I come from England. Now I study in a school. I’m in Class 4, Grade 1. I have a happy family. My father is a teacher. He teaches in a school. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital. And my brother is a driver. I love them very much. my favorite color is blue and I like vegetables best. Do you want to make friends with me?      

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,要求写一篇介绍自己的短文。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,时态为一般现在时态,这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

考点:本题考查要点作文

点评:做英语书面表达时,要注意认真审题,分析体裁,确定时态;分析内容要点,列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性,用好连接词。最后,注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误,写好后多读多修改,我想一定会写出满意的文章来。

 

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