题目内容
【题目】书面表达(45分)
请根据汉语提示写一篇日记。
1.星期六早上,“我”在新华书店买书,遇见一名外国人想买一本词典;
2.书店店员听不懂他说的话,两个都很着急;
3.我上前用英语解决了问题。
要求:书写规范;词数80左右;开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
Saturday, June 7, 2013 Fine
This morning, ______________________________________________
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【答案】
Sunday, March 7, 2009 This morning, I went to Xinhua Bookstore to buy some books. In the bookstore, I saw a foreigner trying to explain something to a shop assistant. But the shop assistant couldn’t understand him. They were both worried and didn’t know what to do. I walked up to them and told the shop assistant that the foreigner wanted to buy a dictionary. The foreigner thanked me for helping him. I was happy that I could help people in English. I will study harder to improve my English.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。因为是一篇日记,所以主要用过去时态,根据提纲可知重点描述三方面:周六早上,遇到一个想买书的外国人;书店店员无法和他交流;我帮助解决了问题。
【亮点说明】这篇短文时态正确,所使用的句式短语较为简单. 主要是主谓结构。但是通过这些简单句式的灵活搭配,使得文章避免单纯的重复,使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。