Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你（Bill)要给笔友（Tom）介绍你们班上周进行的郊游活动。请根据下列表格的提示写一篇70词左右的电子邮件。

活动主题	a field trip
活动时间	Sunday
活动地点	East Park
交通方式	by bike
活动内容	see animals , go boating , have a picnic , take photos
感受	tired , glad

Answer 1

【答案】

Last Sunday my classmates and I went on a field trip to East Park. We met at our school gate early in the morning, and set off at 8 o’clock. All of us went there by bike. First we went to the zoo to see the animals. Then we went boating. At lunch time, we took our food and had a picnic. We took many beautiful photos.

When we returned home, we all felt very tired, but we were glad that we had a good day.

【解析】

试题分析：本文所给材料较为简略，要求介绍自己的一次郊游活动。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般过去态，注意时态和时间状语的搭配。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，注意序数词和连接词的使用。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。