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中国，多么美丽的一个名字。
我们以在这个伟大的国家生活而自豪。我们的人们生活快乐，我们用我们勤劳的双手建设我们的国家。在改革开放后我们国家变得越来越富有，2008年的奥运会成功主办，更标志着我们国家已经进入一个国际经济强国。
我们不会忘记，当雪灾、地震来临时，我们的战士，我们的人们，团结一心、奋勇抵抗的场景。
我们也不会忘记，我们美好的祖国河山，多彩的名胜古迹，我们的祖先伟大的四大发明，我们是炎黄子孙。
中国，我为你自豪。
参考词汇：proud, economic(经济), unit(团结), disaster, rich, powerful
China, I’m proud of you!
I love my country, because we can live a happy life in China, all the people are fair there, all the people make their life by their hands, there isn’t any press or darkness ...

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I love my country,because we can live a happy life in China ,all the people are fair there, all the people make their life by their hands ,there isn’t any press or darkness .Because of the opening-up policy. China becomes more healthy and richer, we can see Hong Kong return to its motherland on July 1st 1997, we can see China have been entered into WTO in 2001, China enter to a new stage. The 29th Olympic Games in 2008 was hold in the capital Beijing .China was developing into an economic intemational country。
China, what a pretty name it is!
I love my country. Chinese people were all united. We can see the soldiers removing the snow without having the New Years’ Day in the snow disaster, we can see the people from all over the country raising money to Yu Shu and Wen Chuan people . From Wenchuan to Yushu, now we have reason to believe why the Yushu could out of trouble after the earthquake. I believe our country will become more and more powerful.
China, I am proud of you! I always belong to my country ,I am proud of China . China has a plenty of places of interest with a long history, we also have a rich of cultural history, we can see the Great Wall, we can see the Qin Shi Huang Tomb has thousands of warriors and horses in this magnificent tomb .We always regard ourselves as the yanhuangzisun and we also created the paper- making, printing, compass, gun-powder .How great our country is!

试题分析: 这是一篇提纲类作文。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。