Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据下列提示写一篇介绍你的朋友Lucy的短文。

1. 我有一个好朋友Lucy，她在第一中学学习。

2. 她住得离学校很远,经常乘公交车去上学。

3. 她喜欢做运动,也经常吃水果和蔬菜,因为她想保持健康。

4. 她非常热爱看书,她想更多地了解世界。

5. 她希望……（适当发挥1—2句）

要求： 1. 词数不少于70词,内容包括所有要点

2.适当发挥，符合逻辑

3.条理清楚，语意连贯，书写整洁。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

I have a good friend. Her name is Lucy. She is in No.1 Middle School. She often go to school by bus, because her home is far away from the school. She likes doing sports, and she play tennis with me after school. She usually eats fruits and vegetables to keep fit. She enjoys reading books very much. Because she wants to learn more about the world. She hopes to travel around the world when she grows up.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的朋友Lucy。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Her name is…，She is …，because her home is...， She hopes to...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，完整地表达出提纲中所列内容。本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，上学情况，接下来介绍她的喜好：运动，饮食和读书，最后介绍她的希望。此处go to school, far away from, like doing sth, keep fit, enjoy doing sth, want to do sth, learn more about, hope to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。