Question

请以The changes to my hometown为题，写一写你的家乡在环境，交通方式等方面的变化，并谈谈你对这些变化的看法。要求：根据题目要求写全要点，字数80词左右，语句通顺，无语法错误。

Answer 1

The changes to my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty.  We could hardly see the blue sky. But now, there are many tall buildings in my  hometown.  The river is clean and the water is clear. There is less pollution than before.
When I was young, the roads were narrow and the transportion conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. It took a lot of time. As time goes by , those has changed. TaiZouStation andTaiZou Airport have been in use for several years.There are many ring roads People usually go to work by bus or by train even by plane.
It was hard to keep touch with others in the past. But now we can talk on the phone, we can also surf the Internet to send mails or to chat on line. It is very esay.
Now we live a happy life .To keep healthy , many people take an active part in sports.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown . I hope my hometown will be better and better.

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求对比介绍家乡的过去和现在。主要用到一般现在时和过去时态，注意used to 的应用。
【亮点说明】这篇短文要点全,句式应用较多例如It was hard to keep touch with others in the past，To keep healthy , many people take an active part in sports等。使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。