Question

假如你是John，今天你在网上看到了下面的帖子。请根据帖子内容，谈谈你的经历或看法，并针对作者的困惑提出一些建议(不少于3条)。

要求：①不要写出真实校名和姓名；        ②字数在100左右；

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I hope my advice is of some value to you, please let me know if that works for you or not!

Good luck!

John

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Eear Madam,

  I’m sorry to know that you have so much trouble with you daughter,first,I think your daughter should take an active part in all kinds of activities, and try to talk with teachers and friends.She can learn to get on well with others.She likes playing computer games.But don’t worry.You may invite some of her friends to have a word with her.Let her know to find that spending too much time on computer games is bad for her health and studies.Try to encourage her to do other things instead of playing computer games.What’s more, as her mother,you should learn something about computer games so that you and your daughter may have something to talk about.Besides,you may find some topics that your daughter is interested in, and then she may talk with you.Don’t lose heart. It will be all right.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文是一个母亲给专家的一封信，她的女儿孤独，打篮球，爱玩电脑游戏，你需要你给出建议。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如:  take an active part in，all kinds of，get on well with others，Try to encourage her to do ，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。