题目内容
七岁的女孩Mary来自美国,在日常生活中,她喜欢听音乐,喜欢去动物园。她家里有一台电脑,她通常在周六玩电脑游戏。她的妈妈每天都会在网上搜索信息,,有时还进行网上购物。她的爸爸喜欢在网上看足球比赛,还经常在电脑上玩游戏。请根据所给提示写一篇短文介绍她及其家人。
要求:
1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确。
2. 至少60词。
Mary is seven years old. She is from America. She likes listening to music and going to the zoo. There is a computer in her home. Mary usually plays computer games on Saturday. Her mother goes on the Internet every day. She usually searches for information and sometimes she goes shopping on it. Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it.
解析试题分析:考查提纲类书面表达:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中用了一些常见短语:be from来自某处; like doing喜欢做某事; listen to 听;search for 寻找;go shopping购物。She likes listening to music and going to the zoo这个句子中and连接两个并列的动词,形式保持一致。Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it这个句子中and连接两个句子,时态保持一致。
考点: 提纲类作文。
Every place offers the possible dangers for getting hurt, even staying at work. We may face dangers like walking into desks or chairs, receiving unexpected cuts from a paper knife and so on. Industrial jobs have similar and more dangers like getting body parts hurt by machines or falling from a height.
No one wants to get hurt. Some accidents are avoidable(可避免的). Most accidents happen because of common things seen every day—an open desk drawer, a chair pulled out too far, water on the floor and so on. We slowly get used to these things we see every day and never think about what they could possibly become in the future.
Think about the following to prevent dangers to yourself and others:
1. If there is something you see and know may become a danger for yourself or others, do something about it. Close a desk drawer, clean up or put a sign over the water, turn off the power before leaving, and so on.
2. Get extra persons’ help and support on a task that is too hard for a single person.
3. Study the situation and think what could possibly happen and change if necessary. Do it before something happens and you won’t have to say some day, “ I should have… How sorry I feel…”
To use an old phrase “ Safety is everyone’s duty.” Looking down on it could lead to being hurt. Keep the rule in mind every day “ Everyone wants to go home in the same condition the came to work in –or better.”
Title:__【小题1】____________ at Work
【小题2】 dangers | There are some dangers like tripping, unexpected 【小题3】 by a paper knife. |
【小题4】 | 1. Most accidents are【小题5】by the common things seen every day. 2. Get used to【小题6】we can see every day and never think about the dangers. |
Safety rules | 1. Turn off the power before you 【小题7】 2. Get extra persons’ help and support if the task is too difficult for you to finish on your【小题8】. 3. Make some 【小题9】 based on the situation. |
Warning | Safety on the job is 【小题10】duty. |
假如你是大连市春藤中学的学生李南,你校新来的外籍教师Mr. Green准备给每个学生建
一份英文档案。请你根据以下信息写一份自我介绍存到档案里。
兴趣与爱好 | 音乐,电影,收集CD五年 |
学习科目 | 擅长数学,英语,喜欢读英语杂志 |
业余活动 | 参加学校唱歌跳舞俱乐部,打乒乓球和游泳,一周进行三次运动 |
食物喜好 | 健康食品,巧克力 |
2. 词数不少于80字
Hi, my name is Li Nan. I’m very glad to introduce myself here.