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【题目】写作 (满分15分)

2014年12月31日晚23时35分,上海外滩陈毅广场发生拥挤踩踏事故。这次事故致36人死亡,49人受伤,伤者多数是学生。为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,学校将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示和要求写一篇演讲稿。

慎重交友

make friends, be careful, especially online…

遇险报警

be in danger, keep calm, call the police for help…

安全饮食

buy and eat food carefully, read instructions and dates, go bad…

遵守交通规则

obey the traffic rules, keep to the right in the street…

要求:1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥。

2. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。

3. 词数80左右。文章开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

How to Keep Safe

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

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In a word, safety must come first!

【答案】

How to Keep Safe

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must keep calm and call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Third, we’d better buy and eat food carefully. If the food is in bags, we should read instructions and dates before eating it. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Fourth, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street. Besides, summer is coming and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.

In a word, safety must come first!

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇材料作文。所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题,深入挖掘题材内涵,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题,同时注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句同时还使用了表示次序的连接词,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。此外,文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语如:we shouldwe must、we’d better和条件状语从句、祈使句等,这为文章增色不少。

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【1】Which of the following would be a good example of using the phrase” once in a blue moon”?

A.Simon often tells jokes. Simon tells jokes once in a blue moon.

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D.Cindy hates to do housework, but she does housework every day. Cindy does housework once in a blue moon.

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A.When the moon has a blue moon.

B.When we cannot see the moon at all.

C.When there are two full moons in one month.

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【3】 How often will a blue moon happen over the next twenty years?__________

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B.Less than once a year.

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D.At least twice a year.

【4】What does the underlined part This fact” in the last paragraph refer to?___________

A.A blue moon is a very rare event.

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C.The moon itself is never really blue.

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