Question

初中生活即将结束，新的生活即将开启,请为你最要好的同学写一段毕业留言：他(她)给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光以及对他(她)最美好的祝愿。

要求：1、可参考下图所给提示词，也可适当发挥，开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

2、字数80词左右。

School life in middle school will come to an end soon.                                           

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

School life in middle school will come to an end soon. I’ll never forget you. You are an outgoing boy/girl. There’s always a smile on your face and everyone likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. At this very moment, I’m saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes: I hope you are happy and healthy forever. I hope you are successful in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，写一段毕业留言。动笔前先确定书写内容，可以先简单描述这纪念相处的情况，然手再表达一下自己的感想，祝福等。由于是抒情性短文，故用将来时态较多，注意时态和时间状语的搭配。写作中选取自己比较熟悉的内同写，主要不要犯语法书写的低级错误。

考点：命题作文

点评：这类作文的说些说难也容易，难在没有给出具体材料，需要自己组织材料，易在可以选取自己熟悉的内容写。不跑题不偏题是写好此类作文的关键，动笔前一定要认真阅读题目，要求然后在动笔。