Question

10分 当重大事件发生时，我相信你一定会记住这个历史瞬间，你在做什么？感受如何？题目自拟。字数（60-80 ）

Answer 1

I can never forget this moment when the earthquake attacked the Sichuan province. I was watching TV when there was a piece of news broadcasted in the CCTV.I was so scared when I saw the scene that many buildings were ruined in dusty. And many people were crying for help. I felt so grieved. I thought that we should be volunteered to rescue and donate money and food to these people. What’s more, this tragedy reminded me that we should raise our realization to protect our environment and prevent this tragedy to happen again in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题。本文所给思路比较清晰，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: I was so scared我十分害怕；we should be volunteered to我们应该自发去做。创造浓厚的叙述氛围等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。