Question

【题目】作文

根据以下信息写一篇文章:

上周末,你的妈妈生病了,没有人做家务.你早上起床后整理床铺,折衣服,打扫房间;中午做饭,给妈妈煮了面条,饭后洗碗,打扫地板,倒垃圾，你妈妈很高兴,你也很开心.做家务能帮助你学会独立。

要求：1.不能照抄本卷中原文；不能出现真实姓名,班级; 2.语句连贯,60-80字

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Answer 1

【答案】

Last Friday, my mother was sick, so after I got up,I folded the clothes, cleaned the room.At noon,I cooked \noodles for mother.After lunch,I did the dishes ,cleaned the room, took out the trash and helped my mother wash clothes .My mother was very happy, I was also very happy, so I learned to independence.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文叫小作者介绍上周五，妈妈生病了，自己做了哪些事情，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如After lunch,I did the dishes ,cleaned the room, took out the trash and helped my mother wash clothes .等等。