Question

12．今年八月，四川省第十二届运动会将在我市举行，全市人民都在积极地为迎接运动会作准备． 为了更好地主办这次运动会，组委会将组建志愿者服务队．
假如你是李平，想当一名志愿者，请给组委会写一封信，提出申请．申请内容必须包括以下要点：
1．我认为志愿者工作很有意义．
2．我是一名初三学生，暑假时间充足．
3．我热爱体育运动，身体强健．
4．我性格外向，能与人和睦相处．
5．我乐于助人，能吃苦耐劳．
注意：（1）词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
      （2）文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息；
      （3）覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear sirs，
 My name is Li Ping．I want to be a volunteer for the 12th Sichuan Sports Meeting．
I think being a volunteer is very important．As a student of Grade Nine of a junior middle school，I have plenty of free time during the summer vacation．I like sports，such as soccer，basketball，swimming and so on．I exercise as often as possible so I keep fit．I am outgoing and I am good at getting well with others．I am ready to help others．I can do lots of hard word．
Helping others is helping ourselves．I'm looking forward to your reply．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                        Yours
                                                        Li Ping．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是关于申请志愿者方面的文章，在写作时，要以一般现在时态为主，重点介绍自己的优势（时间充足、热爱体育体格强健、性格外向、乐于助人、吃苦耐劳等），可以以自己对志愿者的认识开头，然后介绍自己的优势，最后提出希望．

解答 Dear sirs，
    My name is Li Ping．I want to be a volunteer for the 12th Sichuan Sports Meeting．I think being a volunteer is very important．As a student of Grade Nine of a junior middle school，I have plenty of free time during the summer vacation．I like sports，such as soccer，basketball，swimming and so on．I exercise as often as possible so I keep fit．I am outgoing and I am good at getting well with others．I am ready to help others．I can do lots of hard word．Helping others is helping ourselves．I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours Li Ping

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文，要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．