题目内容
【题目】1.你叫李明,阳光中学八年级学生
2.最喜爱的科目是生物,对各种鸟类植物感兴趣
3.想成为观鸟协会的一员,了解更多鸟类知识
4.做点事保护鸟类,星期日下午2-5点可以参加活动.
【答案】
Dear Chairperson ,
I would like to join the Bird watching Society.
First, Let me introduce myself. My name is Li Ming. I am a Grade 8 student at Sunshine Middle School. My favourite subject is Biology. I am very interested in learning different kinds of birds, animals and plants. I want to become a member of the Bird watching society and learn more about birds. I want to do something to protect birds. I like birds and plants. I can take part in activities from 2.pm to 5.pm on Sunday afternoon.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of the Bird watching Society. My telephone number is 5558-6930.
yours sincerely,
Liming
【解析】
试题分析:
这是一篇提纲类作文。本题给出的材料较为详细,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所给材料内容,可知本文主要用第一人称,一般现在时态进行叙述。写作中注意语言的表述应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。给出的要点都要写到文章中。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单. 主要是主谓结构。但是通过一些这些简单句式的灵活搭配,使得文章避免单纯的重复,使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。
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