题目内容
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old girl. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure(压力)on her. Am l wrong?
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议
注意:
1.词数90左右:
2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.短文须包括所有内容要点;可适当发挥,使其通顺、连贯:
4.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Hi,TigerMom,
What troubles you is actually a trouble for many parents in China. My idea is that
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I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old girl. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure(压力)on her. Am l wrong?
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议
注意:
1.词数90左右:
2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.短文须包括所有内容要点;可适当发挥,使其通顺、连贯:
4.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Hi,TigerMom,
What troubles you is actually a trouble for many parents in China. My idea is that
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_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
略
试题分析:本文的写作首先表明自己的看法,可以说明这样对女孩施以压力的方法是不对,表明自己并不赞同这样做;然后说明自己的理由,可以说明孩子在压力过大中学习生活对自己的学习并不好,只会成为书呆子bookworm,并不能很好的适应这个社会,也不能和同学很好的相处,也许这样在压力中学习自己并没有品味到学习的真正乐趣。最后提出自己的两条建议,可以建议这位家长多和孩子沟通,带她去野营,做运动来缓解她的压力,同时改变自己对成功的看法,并非所有成绩好的孩子将来就成功,强调态度看法的改变才是解决问题的根本。
点评:本文有难度,对字数要求也比较多,对于初中英语的作文,着重考察学生连词成句的能力,要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。对于中学作文的写作,尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中,写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章,不要出现中式英文。
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