题目内容

假如你叫李华,是邯郸好少年的候选人之一,请你以“I Am Unique”为题,写一份演讲稿,介绍你在家里以及在学校的表现。

写作要求:

1. 词数60~80,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;

2. 文稿中不得出现真实的人名及相关信息;

3. 写作的要点要紧扣主题,可适当发挥。

I Am Unique

My name is Li Hua. I am lucky to be chosen as one of Handan’s Good Children. Now, I want to _____________________________________________________________________________

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One possible version

I Am Unique

My name is Li Hua. I am lucky to be chosen as one of Handan’s Good Children. Now, I want to say something about myself. I think I am a unique boy.

When I am at home, I listen to my parents, I respect them and sometimes I help them with some housework. Both of my parents say I am a good boy.

When I am at school, I listen to my teachers carefully in class. After class, I usually help my classmates do a lot of things, the floor, doing the homework, and so on.

In a word, I think I am a good and unique boy. I believe I can do better in the future.

【解析】

试题分析:

这是一篇给材料作文,介绍自己被评为邯郸好少年以及在家和在学校的表现。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I am......I help ……I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了自己被评为邯郸好少年,接下来介绍自己在家的表现以及介绍自己在学校的表现,最后认为自己将来会更好。此处用了help them with like cleaningIn a word,等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点:提纲作文。

 

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