Question

8．两个月前，胶东在线就我校初四学生毕业后的人生规划进行了一次问卷调查．请根据图表中提供的数据信息，写一篇100-120词的调查报告，并结合实际谈谈你的观点和毕业后的人生理想．
要求：1．行文不得出现真实姓名和校名； 2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．


  Two months ago，Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation．Here is the result．65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior school．About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation．And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families．Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims．I think they should make it clear what to do next．
In my opinion，we teenagers should have a design for our future life．Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time．
My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients．So，I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University．I'm ready for a hard but colorful senior school life．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容为根据图表中提供的数据信息，写一篇调查报告，并结合实际谈自己的观点和毕业后的人生理想．时态为一般现在时．人称为第一人称．写作要点包括：1．描述图表中的数据信息；2．结合实际谈自己的观点；3．毕业以后的人生理想．
常用重点句型和短语：
hope to do希望做某事
would like to do 想要做某事
so as to 以便，为了…
in my opinion 由我看来
be determined to do决定做某事
so that 以便，为了
参考句子：
65% of us hope to have chances to go to senior school．我们中有65%的人想要有机会上高中．
About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools in order to get jobs easily after graduation．大约20%的人想要学习有用的技能以便在毕业后能后很容易地找到工作．
I think we teenagers should have a design for our future life．我认为我们青少年应当对我们的未来有规划．

解答 Two months ago，Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation．Here is the result．【写作原因】
65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior school．About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation．And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families．Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims．I think they should make it clear what to do next．【调查结果】
In my opinion，we teenagers should have a design for our future life．Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time．【观点】
My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients．So，I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University．I'm ready for a hard but colorful senior school life．【人生理想】

点评 这是一篇图表给出材料的作文．图表内容要包括在作文中，本题中图表内容较为简单，要注意句式的多样性，适当的使用宾语从句，转折词however，连词and等．考生可在作文之前对每部分列出大致的提纲，做到主题明确，条理清楚．可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开做好铺垫．注意行文连贯，书写规范，不要出现一些诸如语法或词汇的错误．