[题目]书面表达(略)根据汉语提示及要求,以Sally’s Dream为题写一篇短文.提示: 1.Sally是一个中学生,她想成为一名职业演员.2.她同时也是一名志愿者,经常参加一些志愿者服务活动,业余时间她还上表演课.3.现在她遇到了一些麻烦,无钱上表演课.她想出了许多办法,如: 打电话给家长.主动辅导孩子的美术.张贴启事寻找工作挣钱等.4．问题� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】书面表达(略)

根据汉语提示及要求,以Sally’s Dream为题写一篇短文.

提示: 1.Sally是一个中学生,她想成为一名职业演员.

2.她同时也是一名志愿者,经常参加一些志愿者服务活动,业余时间她还上表演课.

3.现在她遇到了一些麻烦,无钱上表演课.她想出了许多办法,如: 打电话给家长、主动辅导孩子的美术、张贴启事寻找工作挣钱等。

4．问题解决了，她可以继续上课了，她的梦想会实现的。

要求：1、条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。

2、不少于80个单词。

Sally’s Dream

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【答案】

Sally is a middle school student; she wants to become a professional actor. She is also a volunteer, often takes part in some volunteer service activities. In her spare time, she also has acting lessons.

But she has some trouble now. She had no money for the acting lessons. She has come up with many ways to solve the problem. She made a phone call to the parents to help children's art. Also, she posted notice to find work to earn money.

So far, the problem has been solved and she can continue to have her classes. I hope that her dream will come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，所给内容十分详细，在组织文章时注意时态和句式结构正确就可以了。提醒学生注意用一些短语或句子来使上下文读起来流畅。。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这篇短文注意到了叙述事件时的时态变化，能适当的运用连词和国定短语。文章要点全，几乎没有语病错误。能适当的发挥，文中使用一些好的句型如：she wants to become a professional actor；She made a phone call to the parents to help children's art.，增强了文章的连贯性。