Question

【题目】书面表达，请根据提示语完成短文。

请你写一篇关于江宁生活的巨大变化及自己感受的90字左右的英文短文。

1. 江宁过去是个小镇，现在是个现代化的城市；

2. 江宁有许多自然景观，也有许多名胜古迹，每年有许多游客来江宁旅游；

3. 人们以前多骑自行车或步行出行，现在大部分人开车出行；

4. 几年前污染是个问题，环境也糟糕；但现在政府采取行动正在使得江宁变得山清水秀。

5.我希望……。

注意： 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；第5要点可适当发挥1-2句。

Jiangning

Answer 1

【答案】

In the past, JiangNing wasa small town. But now it is a modern city.

Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. There are a lot of natural landscape and many places of interests in Jiangning. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city..In the past,people went out by bike or on foot.People live a better life.But now they visit by car. In the past,pollution was very serious, there was rubbish everywhere. But now the government is taking actions to stop the pollution.The environment has become more beautiful. The mountain have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer.

I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：话题是家乡的变化，要点是以表格形式表示的，结构很清晰，分三部分，一部分是过去情况，一部分是现在情况，第三部分是将来展望，可以适当增加细节，不能只是把要点翻译成英语、，注意改变文章的样式。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city..等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。