题目内容
书面表达(10分)
以“My Dream”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:1.主要内容需包括:梦想是什么,说出理由以及如何才能实现自己的梦想。
2.60词左右,要求切合题意,内容完整,表达清楚,书写规范。
One possible version:
My Dream
I want to be a writer when grow up. Writing has been part of my life. Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.
I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible. It’s also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them. I decide to go on with my dream till one day it comes true.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇命题作文。本篇作文介绍自己的梦想是什么,说出理由以及如何才能实现自己的梦想。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向,需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料,确定时态主要词汇等问题,本文主要是单数第一人称,一般现在时态。注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I want to be......; I can......;It’s also important to ......;I decide to.....等句式的应用。写作中,应注意描述的全面性;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的梦想是什么,接下来介绍梦想的理由,最后指出实现梦想的方法。此处want to be, grow up, make friends, by doing sth等这些词组的运用以及复合句It’s also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them.的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点:话题作文。