Question

书面表达（共15分）

91.假如你是Jim，你校试行在课间播放音乐，你班的同学对此进行了讨论，看法不一，大多数同学赞同，而部分同学反对。请你根据下面提供的信息，给你们的校长写封信，介绍大家的观点，同时谈谈自己的看法。

原因： 赞同者： 反对者

1.音乐使人们快乐 1.太吵，无法欣赏

2.使大脑得到放松 2.有时上课后还沉浸在刚听的音乐中，不能专心听课

要求：1.词数80~100

2.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥

3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：study efficiency学习效率; concentrate on专心……..

Dear Headmaster,

We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break.All the students in our class gave the ideas.

Yours sincerely,

Jim

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,

We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave the ideas.

Most of us agree the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard study. What’s more, music can help them improve the study efficiency. On the other hand, some students disagree. They think they can not get the expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on studies.

I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by the music. So I don’t like listening to music during the break.

【解析】

试题分析：这是观点型话题作文。本文要写的材料比较具体，一是表达对课间放音乐赞同或反对的观点及理由，二是给出自己的观点及理由。我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文是书信体，主要是一般现在时态，要用好表述观点的句子。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，如make them feel happy，What’s more On the other hand，instead of等，可见该生英语功底扎实。同时作者表述的观点清晰理由明确，文章的表达丰富，有逻辑性，是骗不错的作品。

考点：观点型话题作文。