Question

【题目】书面表达

最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼（Speak out your worries）的调查活动，请根据以下内容和提示要求写一篇英语短文，汇报调查结果并向老师和父母提出建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息

学生比例	烦恼	你的建议
50%	作业多，睡眠不足，压力大	？
30%	父母不理解，缺乏交流
20%	活动少，体质差

Our school has made a survey--- “Speak out your worries”. Here are the results.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Our school has made a survey — "Speak out your worries"．Here are the results．About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day that they don’t have enough sleep. They feel stressed very much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents can’t understand them and are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．

Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad, we will try our best to improve our studies and we want to take more exercise to stay healthy as well.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求根据图表内容写一份调查结果汇报，要将表格内容表述全面并根据调查结果写出你的建议。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据表格提示，可知本文主要从两个方面：烦恼及建议进行写作。要把不同问题比例的学生情况描述清楚。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态。

写作亮点：本文第一段开门见山，直接引入话题；然后对学生的烦恼及建议作了详细的描述。详略得当，重点突出，中心明确。第二段呼吁老师们、家长们给学生减负。主旨鲜明。这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：be strict with sb“对某人严厉”；get along well with“和某人合得来”；try one’s best to do sth“尽某人最大努力做某事”等等。在平时学习中牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。