Question

书面表达（20分）
根据下列遂宁二中八年级三班学生上学方式的调查表，用英语写一篇短文。不少于70个单词。

上学方式	bus	walking	bike	car
学生人数	18	12	25	no
原因，理由	far fron school	good for health near the school	like riding not very far from school	be not allowed (不被允许)to drive car

 

Answer 1

There are fifty-five students in Clss 3,Grade 8 at No.2 Middle School in Suining.
Every day they go to school in different ways. Eighteen students go to school
by bus because they live far from the school. Ten students walk to school.
They think walking is good for health and they live near the school. Twenty-five
students ride their bikes to school because they like riding bikes and their home is not very far from the school. No one goes to school by car because students
are not allowed to drive car to school.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍一般班级的短文。题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要是一般现在时态，人称较为复杂，注意主谓语之间数的问题。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。