Question

书面表达（15分）

俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我们的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助；但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。

注意：

①无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；

②文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；

③文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；

④词数为80左右。

As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble.

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Answer 1

As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of difficulties and need others’ help. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.

I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too. Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文多次使用连接词so、whenever以及一些固定句型，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。