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书面表达：15 分。请以’Loving all living things’为题，写一篇短文，字数80左右。要点如下：1.地球上拥有各种生物，例如（such as）：人、动物、花草树木等（and so on）。 2.生活在同一个地球上，要互相关爱。 3.我们对别人要有礼貌，任何时候不要生气(angry) 4.时时想着帮助苦难的人。 5.不要随意在草地上玩耍，爱护小动物。6.阻止人们砍伐森林。7.动物像人一样，害怕死亡,要善待它们,不要任意杀害。8.努力使地球变得越来越美。

Loving all living things

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Loving all living things

There are all kinds of life on the earth, such as human, animals, plants and trees and so on. We live on the same earth, so we should care for each other. We should be polite to others. Also, we shouldn’t be angry at any time. We should want to help the persons suffering from difficulties. We had better not play on the lawn, and take good care of small animals. The most important thing is to try our best to prevent people from cutting down forests. In fact, animals are like people, and they are afraid of death. So we should be kind to them, and should not kill them. If we do our best to protect the animals, our earth will become more and more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，号召大家要关爱地球上所有的生命。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There are...； We should....; We had better...;The most important thing is...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意完整表达提纲所列内容。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了地球上有各种各样的生命，接下来介绍我们应该互相关爱，最后希望地球会越来越美。此处all kinds of, the same, suffer from, try one’s best to do sth, prevent sb from doing sth, be afraid of 等这些词组的运用和If we do our best to protect the animals条件状语从句的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。