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根据所给的两幅画，以“Don't Waste Time”为题，至少写八句话．要求意思明确，内容必须符合题意，图片下方的单词供选用．

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学生： Don't Waste Time 　　Someone said(X1), “Time is money”. But I think time is even much important(X2) than money, why? Because when money is spent, we can get it back, However, when time is gone, it'll never return. That's why we mustn't waste time. 　　But there are a lot of peoples(X3) who do not know that wasting time means wasting part of their life. They spend their wonderful time to drink and play(X4). 　　Let's safe(X5) time and always remember we have no time to lose. 　　剖析：1．“谋人说”是泛指，要用现在时，所以要改为someone says． 　　2．多音节词在原级前加more，构成比较级．而much在比较级前是加强语气，意为“……得多”，所以应改为much more important． 　　3．people作“人、人们”解是集体名词，没有复数形式，但作复数名词用，其后的动词要用复数．但作“民族”解是可数名词，有单、复数形式，如：Are there any people on the island? The Chinese people is a hard－working peope．中华民族是个勤劳的民族．此处指“人”，所以应用“people”． 　　4．“spend money/time doing sth”是固定短语，意为“花费钱/时间做某事”，因此要改为drinking end playing． 　　5．safe作名词，是“保险箱、冷藏柜”之意，而作形容词是“安全的”，很显然此处为“节约时间”，应用动词“save”． 　　总评：本文从“时间就是金钱”这句话起笔，进一步加以评论，指出时间比金钱还重要的理由，写得十分透彻，先提出论点，后引入正文，这是议论文常见的写作手法． 　　第二段作者对一些人浪费时间的现象进行阐述，只用寥寥几笔就说明了问题．最后的结束语带有号召性，与第一段相呼应，又一次强调了本文的主题，但用词上还有待加强．