Question

【题目】书面表达。

假如你要乘火车去北京旅行，请根据所给提示，写出你的旅行计划。

提示：日程安排：8月21日晚上到达北京；8月22日去天安门广场；8月23日参观故宫；8月24日游览长城；8月25日购物。

要求：（1）短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；

（2）不少于60词。

Answer 1

【答案】I will go on a trip to Beijing. I will go there by train. I will arrive in Beijing at 10:00 p.m. on August 21st. The next morning, I will go to the Tian’anmen Square. And then I will visit the Palace Museum on August 23rd. It will be very interesting. On August 24th I’m going to the Great Wall. On the last day I want to go shopping. I want to buy some presents for my parents. I’m very excited about going to Beijing.

【解析】试题分析：本文让写坐火车去北京旅行的计划，所以句子的时态多用一般将来时，要注意不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接，短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：I will go on a trip to Beijing. I will go there by train. And then I will visit the Palace Museum on August 23rd. I want to buy some presents for my parents. I’m very excited about going to Beijing.用了and并列连词，增加了文章的亮点。