题目内容
【题目】书面表达(共10分)
最近,你们学校开展了以“中国梦,我的梦”为主题的活动,作为一名中学生应该有自己的梦想, 你的梦想是什么呢?请以“My dream”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:1.描述自己的梦想。
2. 如何实现这个梦想。
3. 80—100 个词左右,可适当发挥。
【答案】
My dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven. I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍自己的梦想以及如何实现它。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时,人称为单数第一、第三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My dream is...;When I was...; Now I’m ....;In order to ....; I’ll give my love to...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己梦想会实现的愿望。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了自己的愿望,接下来介绍产生这个愿望的原因,最后指出如何实现自己的愿望。此处用了were very friendly to,cheered me up, hoped to,achieve my dream, as much as possible,out of danger 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。