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【题目】书面表达(共10分)

最近,你们学校开展了以“中国梦,我的梦”为主题的活动,作为一名中学生应该有自己的梦想, 你的梦想是什么呢?请以“My dream”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求:1.描述自己的梦想。

2. 如何实现这个梦想。

3. 80—100 个词左右,可适当发挥。

【答案】

My dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven. I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

试题分析这是一篇给材料作文,介绍自己的梦想以及如何实现它。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时,人称为单数第一、第三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My dream is...;When I was...; Now I’m ....;In order to ....; I’ll give my love to...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己梦想会实现的愿望。

写作亮点本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了自己的愿望,接下来介绍产生这个愿望的原因,最后指出如何实现自己的愿望。此处用了were very friendly to,cheered me up, hoped to,achieve my dream, as much as possible,out of danger 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

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【题目】 John is six years old. He can read and write well. But he can’t tell the time. He says “breakfast time”, “lunchtime”, and “teatime” when it is eight o’clock, twelve o’clock and four o’clock in the afternoon. His mother doesn’t know how to help him.

One day John’s aunt, Mary, comes to see his mother. His mother tells her about that. “Let me help you. I think I can help him.”

When John gets home after school, Mary starts to teach him.

“Can you count, John?” she asks him.

“Yes. One, two, three, four…” John says. “That’s great. Now I put the longhand on twelve and the shorthand on one that is one o’clock. I put the short hand on two, what is the time?”

“Two o’clock.”

“Good. And on three?”

“Three o’clock.”

It is then four o’clock in the afternoon, and John’s aunt asks him, “What time is it now, John?”

“Teatime, Aunt.” John looks at the clock and answers.

【1】 John’s mother can’t help him to _________ the time.

A. read B. write C. tell D. listen to

【2】When it’s twelve o’clock, John says it’s _______.

A. breakfast time B. lunchtime

C. supper time D. teatime

【3】 Mary is John’s ________.

A. mother B. aunt C. teacher D. sister

【4】The underlined word “count” means “_________” in Chinese.

A. 认识 B. C. D. 熟记

【5】From the passage(短文) we know ____________.

A. John thinks breakfast time is eight in the morning.

B. John thinks four o’clock in the morning is teatime.

C. John can’t count

D. John has a ice watch but it doesn’t work.

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