Question

【题目】请你以“My family”为题，写一篇小短文。内容包括：家庭成员的介绍、年龄、职业、各自的爱好……等等，可以适当发挥。

要求：语言正确，表达流畅，书写美观，词数不少于60。

My Family

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Answer 1

【答案】

My family

I am a middle school student. I am a boy of 12. I have a happy family.

There are three people in my family-my father, my mother and I. My father is a worker. He works in a factory near my home. He is 36 years old. He likes playing soccer. My mother is 35. She is a teacher in No.1 Middle School. She teaches Chinese. She likes singing and dancing. She is good at singing and she dances well. I am a student in No.1 Middle School. I’m in Class 4 Grade 7.I like all my subjects. But my favorites are math and English.

All my family work hard. We are very happy every day.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求对家庭成员的年龄、职业、各自的爱好等等方面作介绍。本文的时态是一般现在时，要根据主语正确使用am, is , are，同时要分清主语是否是三人称单数，准确地用动词的原形或加s/es的动词形式。

写作亮点：本文按要求对家庭成员的年龄、职业、各自的爱好等等方面作了介绍。表达清楚，时态准确。短文按总－分－总的框架，第一自然段总写I have a happy family。第二自然段分别介绍各家庭成员的年龄、职业、爱好等等。第三自然段则与第一自然段相呼应：We are very happy every day. 重点突出，中心突出。