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很快就要初中毕业了,中考完后每个人都有自己的计划或者愿望。下课时,有几位同学谈了自己的想法,有人想学习,有人想旅游,你又有什么想法呢?请根据提示写一篇短文介绍一下吧:

提示词:used to travel learn more about… after the exam hope

要求:1)所有提示词都应用上,语言运用准确得当,句子通顺,表达符合语言逻辑,可发挥适当想像,字数80左右。

2)不得出现真实姓名及所在学校名称等个人相关信息。

答案:
解析:

  Jim used to be very busy and hardly had time to play.After the exam, he would like to travel to Beijing to relax himself.He thinks it's a beautiful city.He can learn more history about China at the same time.Amy, a girl who is interested in computer, hopes to learn how to use the computer after the exam.Then she can do many things on computer.As for me, I would like to do something different.Maybe I will volunteer my time to help other people in the poor area.I'm sure I'll be happy when I help them.(此部分为考生自主发挥部分)

  写作第三节评分要求:

  1)采用总体评分法:考生能否根据写作提示,较好地将写作相关内容进行归纳、提炼、运用来完成书面表达任务。评分时,先确定所属档次,然后以档次的要求进行微调,最后给分。

  2)注重内容的完整及语言表达的准确,语法、单词拼写和标点符号错误,每处扣0.5分。

  评分档次和标准:


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假设你是一名初三毕业生,考上了理想的学校。今天是开学第一天,请你根据下表所列的内容要点,用英语写一篇日记,写下这一天的感受。

注意:

1、词数90左右;

2、日记的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;

3、日记须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;

4、日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

  Monday, Sept.3 Fine

  Today was the first day of my new life.I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year.I was excited as well as worried.

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