题目内容
2.在你的学习和生活中,一定有你引以为骄傲的人、物或事.请以"I am proud of …"为题写一篇短文.提示:
1.可根据你的学习和生活中内容充分发挥.
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
3.短文中请勿使用你的真实姓名、地名和所在学校名称;
4.短文必须写在答题卷上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分.
分析 这是一篇提纲类作文.内容为就学习和生活中,自己引以为骄傲的人、物或事,以"I am proud of …"为题写一篇短文.时态主要为一般过去时.人称为第一人称.写作要点包括:1.事情的起因;2.事情发展的经过;3.事情最后的结果;4.我对这次事件的看法和感受.常用到的重点句型和短语:see sb.doing sth…,keep doing sth.,at the end of…,one of…等.
解答 I am proud of my experience
I still remember how I became a good basketball player.The first day I went to middle school,I saw some of my classmates playing basketball.I was amazed that how skillful they were!I was determined to be just as good as them.Later on,I watched them carefully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
I am really proud of this experience,because it helps me realize that we all can achieve our dreams by working hard.It also helps me understand"Practice makes perfect"better.
点评 这是一篇半开放式作文.只限制了作文的大致范围,给了考生自我发挥的很大的余地.考生在写作中需切题,将事情的来龙去脉叙述清楚,切忌跑题.此外可适当丰富词汇和语法知识的运用和必要连词的使用.