Question

书面表达（本题共15分）
生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法…….现在，某英文报纸举行“分享（Sharing）”为话题的征文，请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：根据中文和英文参考词汇，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑，不少于80—100词的短文。文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：share…with…;experience; interest; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident
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Answer 1

One possible version:
I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas ,problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.

解析试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，由于是描述自己经历过的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态和现在完成时态，人称是第一人称。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
考点：命题作文的写作
点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。