Question

基础写作

请根据以下的情景说明和写作要求，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容．

[写作内容]

陈林是某市第一中学高三年级一班的学生．他在该校学习已近五年．他们学校前面有条大河．过去河水清洁．但前年河对面建了一个化工厂，这个工厂把污水排到河里，致使河水发黑、发臭．该厂噪声也很大．这种情况严重地影响了学生的学习、休息和健康．因此，在夏天来临之际；请你以陈林的名义写信给市长．要求市长采取措施，更好地关心学生的健康．

[写作要求]

1．必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容(不包括已经给出的句子)；

2．短文必须包含所有内容；不得在信中使用自己的真实姓名和地址；

3．可适当增加细节或感受，使其连贯完整．

［评分标准］

概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性．

Dear Mr．Mayor,

　　I am a senior student in a middle school．I am writing to ask you for help．________

　　Thank you．

Yours,

Wang Li

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Dear Mr．Mayor, 　　I am a senior student in a middle school．I am writing to ask you for help．I have been studying here for five years and there is a big river in front of our school, the water in it used to be very clean．However, a chemical works was set up on the other side of the river the year before last, and the waste water from the factory runs into the river without being made clean and makes the water dirty and smells terrible, what’s more, the factory gives off loud noises．What’s worse, the pollution has brought us great harm in our life．We can hardly study and live normally．Now summer is coming, I hope you can do something to help us． 　　Thank you． Yours, Wang Li