Question

假如你们班明天下午召开一次关于英语学习方法交流的班会。请你以How do I learn English?为话题，根据下面的提示写一篇简短的发言稿。要求: 70词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
提示：1. 加入英语俱乐部；  2. 常去英语角； 3. 每天早晨早起记单词； 4. 常做听力练习；  5. 收看英语节目。
Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s an honor to talk with all of you here.                                                                                
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s an honor to talk with all of you here. I want to give you some advice on how to learn English well. In order to improve my English, I joined an English club. And I often go to the English corner and talk with others in English. I usually remember new words as soon as I get up every morning. I often follow the tapes to do some listening practice. In my spare time, I often watch some English programs on TV. I have made some progress this term, and do you want to have a try?
That’s all. Thank you!

试题分析：本文的写作注意条理性的把握，将文章的要点要进行全面的说明。首先表达自己为了学好英语而加入了英语俱乐部I joined an English club.常去英语角和别人用英语交流go to the English corner and talk with others in English.每天早晨早起记单词可以用as soon as句型来表达“一…就”，句式上显得紧凑，活泼。然后说明自己常做听力练习do some listening practice.收看英语节目I often watch some English programs on TV.最后呼吁大家也试试这些方法，并且自己已经取得了一些成功do you want to have a try.
点评：初中英语的作文，出考察学生连词成句的能力外，还要求学生能够变换句式，学会用不同的表达，来表达同一个意思，要在“准”字和“美”上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面，同时要学会多用副词来修饰谓语动词，这样显示出深厚的语言根底。对于初三的作文，在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。