Question

上星期学校就周末补课问题在家长中作了一次调查。以下是家长的观点：多数家长赞同周末补课，部分家长却表示反对。请你根据下面表格中的提示作总结汇报，并表达你的观点。
要求：（1）可以适当增加细节，要求意思连贯，语句通顺。
　　　（２）词数８０字以上，开头已给，不计入总词数。

Most parents	A few parents
get more knowledge	too tired, too much pressure
have better grades	can’t have a good rest
not play computer games or watch TV	no time to do what they like to do

Last week, we did a survey of what parents think of extra classes on weekends. Here are the results.            
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                       
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible version：
Last week, we did a survey of what parents think of extra classes on weekends. Here are the results. Most parents think it’s good to have classes on weekends. If students have classes on weekends, they can get more knowledge and they can have better grades. And they can’t play computer games or watch TV. A few parents think it’s not good to have classes on weekends. Because now students are too tired and have too much pressure . They need time to have a good rest. And if they have classes on weekends, they will have no time to do what they like to do.
I think it’s not good to have classes on weekends. Because students are too tired on weekdays. They need to spend some time with friends. What’s more, if students have extra classes on weekends, they won’t have enough time to finish their homework.

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般现在时的表达方式。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，开头结尾相呼应。开头指出家长对周末补课持两种观点，认为周末补课有利也有弊。第二段论述自己对周末补课的态度。此处用了条件状语从句If students have classes on weekends, they can get more knowledge and they can have better grades. it’s good to ，have a good rest，What’s more,这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。最后在说周末补课太多不利于家庭作业的完成与文章开头相呼应。