Question

2013年我国新一届领导人给我们勾画出我们全民族的美好蓝图------“中国梦”。2014年是实现“中国梦”的开局之年。作为一位即将毕业的中学生，你是否也勾画出了自己的“中国梦”呢？请以MY CHINESE DREAM为题，结合自己的实际，勾画一下你自己的“中国梦”。并谈谈实现自己的“中国梦”的具体途径。
要    求：短文应包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥。
文中不得出现真实的人名，校名等相关信息。
文章长度：约100至120 词之间。
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Answer 1

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi's Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.
I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people's lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.
To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般过去及现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:come true实现，成为现实；talk about谈论某事；not only……but also……不但……而且……；from now on从现在开始；as much as差不多；so that以便，以至于；等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。