Question

书面表达（共1题，计20分）

学校将在下周举行英文演讲比赛，Jack的话题是 “对我影响最深的人”，请根据以下材料，帮他组织一篇100字左右英文演讲稿，介绍一下三位对他影响最深的人，并说说你的感想。

Persons	Job	Details
My mother	a teacher	1. forties; 2. full of love（至少举一例说明）; 3. decide to donate her body after her death
Tan Dun	a composer	1. born in Hunan, China； 2. help build a bridge between the East and the West; 3. bring Chinese and Western music together;
Jackie Chan	a film star	nearly 100 films, 2.join humour and exciting action together win many awards; 3.spend many years doing charity work;

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

Answer 1

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

My mother is a teacher. She is in her forties. She has a heart full of love and she has donated blood many times. To my surprise, she has decided to donate her body after her death.

Tan Dun is a composer. He was born in Hunan, China. He has helped build a bridge between the East and the West. He has successfully brought Chinese and Western music together.

Jackie Chan is a film star. He has acted in nearly 100 films, In the films, he joined humour and exciting action together perfectly. He has won many awards. He is also a humanitarian. He has spent many years doing charity work. He is thought highly of by many people.

They are all my heroes. They are really worth learning from.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时，主语主要是第三人称，写作中注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文能够根据写作要求，较好地把所给材料内容进行归纳整合，内容覆盖所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。同时灵活使用多种句式，使文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。此外，文章中还使用了一些的常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意总结，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：材料作文。