Question

【题目】书面表达

今天是周六，Jeff在家做作业。他的爸爸、妈妈、妹妹和爷爷也都在家。请根据图片提示写一篇短文，介绍一下这一家人各自在做什么。可适当发挥，次数不少于50。

Answer 1

【答案】It’s Saturday today. Jeff and his family are all at home. Jeff is doing his homework. His father is reading newspapers. His grandfather likes watching TV very much. He is watching a TV soap now. Jeff’s mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen. Where is Jeff’s sister? Oh, she is painting in the garden.

【解析】

本文属于图表作文，介绍Jeff一家人在做什么。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如like doing, very much, TV soap, in the kitchen以及in the garden。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。