Question

15．根据要求完成大作文
同学们，健康的生活习惯对于成长中的你们是非常重要的．请以How to Keep Healthy为题，从锻炼、饮食、睡眠及其它方面谈谈你的做法和看法．
要求：
1．语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2．书写工整、规范；
3．根据所给内容，请做适当发挥；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名和真实地名；
5．词数：70词左右．
How to Keep Healthy．

Answer 1

分析 本文是话题作文．本题是围绕健康展开叙述，重点是从锻炼、饮食、睡眠及其它方面谈谈你的做法和看法．你首先应该说明健康的重要性，然后，分别叙述如何才能保持健康---健康的生活习惯，健康的生活方式应是怎样的．最后，要发出倡议，号召大家保持健康．在写作时，本文的人称可以用第一人称，因为文章涉及的内容是一种常态，所以时态一般应该用一般现在时．应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展．另外文中不得出现真实姓名和真实地名；词数为70词左右．

解答 参考范文：
How to Keep Healthy
  As we all know，it's very important to keep healthy．But do you know how to keep healthy？
  Firstly，I think we must have enough food to keep us healthy．Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy for morning．We must also have the right kind of food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables，but less junk food．Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．
  Secondly，it's necessary for us to take exercise．Exercise will keep us active and strong．
  Thirdly，I think staying up is bad for our health．If we can't get enough sleep，we may have a headache．We should go to bed early and get up early．
  Lastly，listening to music or chatting can also make us feel relaxed．

点评 本题为话题作文．本书面表达的中心是如何才能保持健康，所以应该围绕题目的提示进行书写．应该注意表述的逻辑性和条理性，尽量用简单的语言来表述．要书写工整、规范，字数合乎要求．