Question

2013年1月10日，18位美国大学生参观了我校，交流了同学们的学习和生活情况。我的朋友Julia作为初三（6）班的代表之一参加了这次交流活动，收获很大。以下是Julia和外国友人交流的一些信息。请你帮我整理出一篇以“My friend Julia”为题的短文。

要求：1. 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥。

      2. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。

      3. 词数：100词左右。

Julia	1998年出生在福建，和爷爷奶奶生活在泰兴。
Hobbies	①喜欢英语：常看英语杂志、电影，每天坚持练习说英语。 ②网上购物：价廉物美，棉织品穿起来舒服。 ③喜欢春节：至少写两个理由。
School life	离校远，骑车20分钟，在校过得非常愉快。
Lifestyle	很少锻炼，两餐间常吃像汉堡、糖果之类的零食。请给她至少两点建议。
Dreams	①地球上没有一点污染。学生可以在网上学校学习。 ②想成为一名科学家，使我们的国家更强大。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

                                       My friend Julia

I have a friend named Julia. She has been with her grandparents since she was born in Fujian in 1998.

She likes English ,so she often reads English magazines ,watches English movies and keep on practising speaking English every day. She is fond of shopping in the Internet,because things are cheaper and nicer . she likes comfortable cotton clothes. It takes her 20- minute’s ride to school. She gets well along with her classmates. She does little exercise and has hamburgers and candies between two meals. I think she should do more exercise and eat more fruits and vegetables.

She dreams that there is no pollution on the earth and students can study on net school. She dreams to be a sicentist so that she can make our country stronger.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要写Julia的爱好、学校生活、习惯和梦想，全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 pkeep on practising ， practising speaking，is fond of， gets well along with 等短语；过去分词做定语named Julia；时间状语从句since she was born in Fujian in 1998，结果状语从句so she often reads English magazines ,watches English movies and keep on practising English every day，宾语从句she should do more exercise and eat more fruits and vegetables.和that there is no pollution on the earth and students can study on net school；目的状语从句so that she can make our country stronger；不定式做宾语to be a sicentist 。 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文