Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是张明,你是学校“环保俱乐部” (Saving the Environment Club) 的志愿者。上周六，你们俱乐部组织了志愿者活动。请给你的笔友Ben写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次活动的情况,并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法，并注意书信格式。80词左右.

其内容包括：

1、介绍自己是环保俱乐部的自愿者。

2、活动内容有：张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。

3、当我们完成所有工作后都感觉很累，但却觉得很快乐,很有成就感。

4、我认为做一名志愿者非常不错。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Ben,

I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, I did some volunteer work with other volunteers.

Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.

I think it's fantastic to be a volunteer.

What do you think of volunteering? Please write back soon!

Yours,

Zhang Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者给你的笔友Ben写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次活动的情况,并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。