题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是David,请根据下面表格中的内容,写一篇短文做自我介绍。
Name | David Smith | |
Age | 12 | |
Birthday | May 10th | |
Job(职业) | middle school student | |
Favorite | color | blue(有蓝色的书包和夹克) |
sport | tennis(每天放学后和同学一起打球) | |
food | rice and vegetables,(because….) | |
subject | English,(because….) | |
day | Sunday,(because….) | |
Telephone number | 3221-7985 |
要求:1.必须包含表格中所有的内容;
2.将省略号部分补充完整;
3.60词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m David Smith.
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I’m David Smith. I am 12 years old. My birthday is on May 10th. I am a middle school student. My telephone number is 3221-7985. My favorite color is blue. I have a blue bag and a blue jacket. I like sports and I like playing tennis best. I often play tennis with my classmates after school every day. I like rice and vegetables because they are good for my health. My favorite subject is English. I think English is very interesting. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I like Sunday best because I can visit my cousins on Sundays.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据题目的要求以David的身份做一个自我介绍,题目中利用表格的形式,给了我们具体的写作内容,我们需要将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。其中有两句话我们需要翻译成英语,还有一些内容需要我们补充完整。这些内容主语包括年龄、生日、最喜欢的颜色、科目、运动和食物等。所涉及的语言和语法都是学生们比较熟悉的,因为这类的文章在教材中见到的比较多。通过分析可知,这篇作文应使用一般现在时态,第一人称I来叙述。写作时,需要使用一些好的句型和短语,以及一些连接词,使文意连贯。
写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目的要求,做了一个自我介绍。首先短文里包含了题目中的所有要点,内容完整,需要自己补充的内容也非常合理,符合全文的表达需要;其次这篇短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法准确,语言表达也合乎英语的规范;最后短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句式,如My favorite color is blue、I like sports and I like playing tennis best、I like rice and vegetables because they are good for my health、My favorite subject is English. I think English is very interesting等。