题目内容

寒假期间,你和你的家人或朋友去哪儿度假了?谈谈你认为寒假期间最有趣的一次旅行,说说你的所见所闻,同时你对暑假旅行又有什么期待和计划呢?(词数80左右)

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I had a good time during the winter holiday. My family and I went to the west lake and saw beautiful scenery. We went sightseeing, shopping, enjoyed some special snacks and learned more about the culture and history of Hangzhou city. To my joy, I made a few new friends there. The most important is that I had a good rest.and enjoyed ourselves! I want to visit the Great Wall during the coming summer holiday. Maybe then we will have a better time and learn more about our culture.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇开放作文。本文要求文章的提示并结合自己的寒假经历完成这篇作文,我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含寒假中和家人的旅游地方,表达出旅行中的所见所闻,并写出暑假中旅行的期待和计划等方面进行陈述,表达出自己的观点。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态,人称主要是第一人称,注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地描述了自己的寒假旅行历程,并表达出了暑假的期待和计划,符合文中的要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语,包含表语从句的准确使用是本文的一大亮点.To my joyThe most important is that I had a good rest.and enjoyed ourselves!have a better time学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点:话题作文。

 

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A primary school teacher asked her students to write a composition about what they would like God to do for them. At the end of the day, while marking the compositions, she read one that impressed her deeply. Her husband, who had just walked in, saw her crying and asked her, What happened?

She answered, Read this. It is one of my students compositions.

Dear God, tonight I ask you for something very special: Make me into a television. I want to take its place and live like the TV in my house. Have my own special place, and have my family around me. To be taken seriously when I talk, I want to be the centre of attention and be heard without interruption(打断) or questions. I want to receive the same special care that the TV receives even when it is not working. Have the company of my dad when he arrives home from work, even when he is tired. And I want my mom to want me close when she is sad and upset, instead of ignoring(不理) me. And ...I want my brothers to fight to be with me...I want to feel that my family just put everything aside, every now and then, just to spend some time with me. And last but not least, make sure that I can make them all happy and entertainvt.娱乐) them. God, I dont ask you for much. I just want to live like our TV.

At that moment the husband said, My God, poor kid, what horrible parents! .The teacher looked up at him and said, That composition is our sons!

1.Why did the teacher cry?

A. Because a composition moved her deeply.

B. Because the composition was very bad.

C. Because the students were lazy.

D. Because she had a fight with her husband.

2.Who was the boy that wrote the composition?

A. student who was with God.

B. A student who was like a television

C. A student in her class, but not her son.

D. A student in her class, in fact, her son.

3.According to the article, what will happen when the boy talks?

A. Everyone will pay attention to him.

B. He will be interrupted.

C. No one will pay attention.

D. His mother will talk to him.

4.Which is not right according to the passages?

A. TV can entertain them

B. TV can catch the attention of his family.

C. TV can give you answers when you ask question.

D. TV can receive special care from his family.

5.According to the article, we can know the boy is_________.

A. naughty B. lonely C. happy D. Wrong

 

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