题目内容
【题目】书面表达。(共15分)
My hobby
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【答案】
My hobby
Everyone has his own hobby, it may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music, though I'm not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable . When I am angry with something , it aslo can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇短文主要讲述了作者的爱好,从不同的方面介绍的自己的爱好,在书写时应该注意时态和动词短语,在写作时应注意符合题意,同时应注意语言的准确性和连贯性。
写作亮点:这是一篇很好的短文。文中用到了一些好的句型When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music;When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down.给文章增色不少。