题目内容
【题目】书面表达。
请根据下列对盐城湿地的描写写一篇90词左右的短文。
要点:1. 盐城, 江苏北部的一个城市,以其拥有的湿地而出名。最大湿地面积450,000多平方千米,是众多鸟类的理想庇护所。
2. 食物丰富,有许多昆虫和多种植物。
3. 许多鸟类在那儿生活,最有名的是丹顶鹤,每年许多丹顶鹤在这儿过冬。
4. 自己的感想。(至少两点)
【答案】
Yancheng is a city in the north of Jiangsu . It is famous for its wetlands. The biggest wetland there has an area of more than 45,000 hectares. It's an ideal shelter for many endangered birds.
There are a lot of insects and many kinds of plants in the wetland. They provide birds with enough food. So there are lots of birds living in the wetlands. The red-crowned cranes are the most famous birds in Yancheng wetlands. Every year, a lot of red-crowned cranes stay here for winter.
Wetlands are perfect homes for birds and animals, we must take actions to protect our wetlands. If wedon't, it will be impossible to see many endangered birds in the future.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇作文叫小作者介绍盐城湿地的情况,小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点:这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。如There are a lot of insects and many kinds of plants in the wetland. They provide birds with enough food. So there are lots of birds living in the wetlands.等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。