在初中三年的学习生活中.父母.老师给了我们很多帮助．假设你是李明.在即将毕业之际.用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情．感谢的对象在父母.老师中任选其一．内容必须包括以下提示点:1.感谢的对象及原因,2.举例说明帮助你的事由.经过和结果,3.你的感受和打算．注意:1.文中不得出现真实的人名.校名及地名,2.词数在80-100之间.已给出的文字不计入总� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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4．在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助．假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情．感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一．内容必须包括以下提示点：1、感谢的对象及原因；2、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果；3、你的感受和打算．
注意：1、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数．
DearMum，
Words can't show my thanks to you，You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming．

分析本题是一篇提纲作文，写作内容是在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助．假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情．要求是感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一，根据这个内容可知这里叙述的过去的事情，所以句子应该用过去时．后面的感受及打算部分句子应该用将来时．要注意句子上文之间的衔接．

解答 Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad，
Words can't show my thanks to you．You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming

点评本题是一篇提纲提作文，写给自己的父母或老师的感谢信，学生比较有话说，但是要注意提示要点一定写全．同时还要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．