Question

假设你是来自海口的李明，请根据以下表格，以Changes in My Hometown 为题写一篇70词左右的英语短文。

	In the past	Nowadays
house	low	big and tall…
school	old	modern…
road	narrow	wide…

 要求：1.短文须包括表格所提示的全部内容。
2.书写规范，正确使用标点符号及大小写。语句通顺流畅。
3 短文不少于60词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in My Hometown
My mane is Li Ming. I come from Haikou. Some changes have taken place in my hometown.
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                          

Answer 1

Changes in My Hometown
My mane is Li Ming. I come from Haikou. Some changes have taken place in my hometown.In the past,people lived in old dark house.But nowadays,they can live in tall and bright buildings.Students feel very happy because they can study in modern schools.Teachers use computers.What’s more,roads are becoming wider.There are ring roads in haikou too.In the past,roads were narrow.I love my hometown.

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细但很简单，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑，不可遗漏要点，也可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，本文以一般现在时态为主，主语是第一人称和第三人称。
【亮点说明】这篇文章主要是家乡的变化。文中使用了一般过去时和一般现在时进行比对，让读者体会到作者家乡所呈现的巨大变化。文中使用的there be句型，because引导的原因状语从句，还有恰当的连接插入语What’s more等为文章增色不少。